strive
please forgive me i've fallen in a trap, that wont let me go its tough but i'll struggle to survive, its like dwindeling in all this crap, to the left to the right there is nowhere to arrive, up, down there is a maze all around, with your help, your guidance, your love i know i'll make it through this alive, dont cry, dont weep, dont even make a sound, because sooner or later we'll be together as i continue to strive.strive
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Tags: Emotional
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ChastePoet commented on strive
08-29-2009
- I love the beginning of the poem and how you opened up and how you have expressed your feelings. Great job on this poem. I really enjoyed reading the introduction. Way to go!
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