Sub -Concious

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Sub -Concious

Tears. from under my shades
I take my hand and wipe them away
If people saw them what would they say
but they keep falling like a replay
Fears. they get in the way
of what I think and what I portray
of what I do and what I negate
of when I'm calm and when I'm irate
I hear a voice in my brain
that says on earth I will not remain
but while I'm here there's people to change
so give yourself with nothing to gain
Bags. form under my eyes
from staying up until the sunrise
filling paper line after line
until I find peace-time after time
I preach, but not in a church
on cement isles and acres of dirt
and I will never finish my work
until those who are last become first

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Equity commented on Sub -Concious

02-25-2009

Look deeper into your thoughts. And then search for the words that stimulate a visual of your exerience. Write to see and then see what you write

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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