Suicide

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    • XxRavenxX
    • I got one of my poems published!! SO happy!!

    Suicide

    Life is so cruel when you live alone.

    Walking in the shadows of the unknown.

    Growing more afraid everyday.

    Pleading to people to stay.

    Knowing that all you have is lonliness.

    Closing your eyes and dreaming of a better life.

    Crawling towards the knife.

    Crying to yourself in the dark.

    Thoughts of suicide flooding your mind.

    The knife looking nicer and nicer every time.

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    VampireGirl666 commented on Suicide

    10-09-2009

    sweetness. i love it. it shows your emotions and how you feel. its awesome!

    PRober commented on Suicide

    06-26-2009

    wow... kinda haunting, spooky, un-nerving but GOOD! Very!

    meremortal commented on Suicide

    05-17-2009

    i like this one especially the line "Walking in the shadows of the unknown."

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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