Surrender

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    Surrender

    SURRENDER
    By: Saelynne

    Falling, heart racing, scared.
    Being caught, being found.
    Eyes gazing wide at my fate.

    Exhilarated, Overwhelmed but not wanting to let go;
    caught up in this wonderful web of emotions.
    Delighted yet unsure of what will happen.
    I let go as my worries are cast in the wind.

    Embracing, accepting what is.
    Not wanting to turn back; not wanting to turn away from all that I feel.
    My heart, screaming overjoyed.
    I surrender. I surrender.
    I am yours.

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    BadBadBear commented on Surrender

    07-04-2010

    A very well written masterpiece you share! ****************BBBear

    Phoenix9 commented on Surrender

    12-17-2008

    very well written, more please

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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