SWEET NIGHT

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    SWEET NIGHT

    one candle is lit
    incense are burning
    roses laid at the ground
    darkness surrounds the room
    you lay as if winds of fate
    blew across your body
    eyes swiming in a ocean of
    forbidden desires
    my hand reaches out to grab
    a small portion of hair
    massageing every strand of hair
    body warming sounds arrive
    your face changing every second
    panting racing roaring tasting
    slow steady soundly claming
    done and the candle is blown out
    body wrapped up as if two souls
    finally joined
    with eyes close i say to you
    as a tiny whisper to a new born
    oh sweet night to wake up to a sweet
    morning. adew and adew till next time.
    peace love and soul

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    Tempy commented on SWEET NIGHT

    08-20-2009

    I like this. very nice and romantic yet a little erotic.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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