Temptation

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Temptation

A poem at its best still feels less
than the words to express to you

The hurt the pain the love the gain
and all that they are going through

Two hearts beat together for a moment so sure
standing there breathless so innocent and pure

Four hands two faces lusts desires set in
two minds take over as they fall into sin

Regret and worry sorrow and shame
who there between them is the one to blame

Faith still strong as they both bow their heads
two souls are forgiven as they lay it to rest.

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sweetjuliet commented on Temptation

06-28-2009

Girl sooo love this poem!! Awesome words!! Please read my Poem called Simple..I mispelled one word but its all good, lol.

peacefully commented on Temptation

04-24-2009

GOOD POEM, AND GOOD MESSAGE.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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