The breeze that comforts my soul...

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    The breeze that comforts my soul...
    The breeze that comforts my soul...
    Brings a warmth that it so great,
    A feeling that brings me hope,
    A joy that's all around me,
    A soft touch of love from the heavens,
    A great laughter of a loving family,
    A smile from ear to ear,
    But most of all,
    A feeling of knowing I'm home.

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    MrGee commented on The breeze that comforts my soul...

    12-03-2009

    Very nice. Again, you paint a good picture in the mind of the reader. And yes, it is good to know the feeling of being home. The lines are very well written, however, the line that reads - Brings a warmth that is so great - . I believe could be said differently. perhaps cud be written - And a warm glow inside my heart. of course, what i am indicating is that particular line would read better if you expressed the feeling deep inside the heart. The last verse of the poem is excellent.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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