The casket

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    The casket

    Seeing the ones you love lying there in there caskets
    Sometimes i wish it was yout there instaed of them
    The way you make me look stupid when
    Your the one doing stupid things

    Makeing my take care of your responsabilties
    When you should takeing care of them
    Saying that im lazy when your the lazy one
    Always doing your so called important things

    When they are going out partying
    And im the one sacrificing everything i have
    The important things that come into my life i have to site and wait
    why they go bye
    But everything comes first for you

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    Candytina commented on The casket

    04-14-2009

    needs some work on grammar but hell everybody has touble with that...its really good otherwise.

    rosejane commented on The casket

    04-14-2009

    good job but just a little more work on your spelling and grammar... take care...Jesus cares!

    lovinsmind commented on The casket

    04-14-2009

    good idea needs a little more structure but the genral idea is very good.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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