the dance of love

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the dance of love

her skin so warm.her mile so bright                                               she filled my heart with such delight                                               her long blonde hair.her legs so pure                                             she was the one i knew for sure                                                      her heart as clean as a snow white dove                                             i knew for sure,i was in love                                                              together we danced in a fallen rain                                                     my heart was stole with this funny pain                                               no mountain so high.no river to wide                                           could compare to the feeling i had inside                                           this night had meaning,as i could see                                                we knew this night was meant to be                                                   just the beginning.we reached for the stars                                        we grabbed them from both near and far                                            and when it was over no matter how hard i try                                      i saw the biggest of those stars,from the gleam in her eye

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am2anangel commented on the dance of love

08-31-2009

Great poem; just try and correct those couple of errors I mentioned and this will be a very strong piece. Well done, I enjoyed your rhythm and flow.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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