the dusty lion

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Life
  • ,
  • Other

    Poem Commentary

    i  know this ones lame i wrote it when i was 13 and thought id put it on here for giggles lol

    the dusty lion


    the dusty lion lifts his head  as violent death comes rushing in.
    devastation threw out the land .
    the trees  all gone they sway no more.
    the plants the shrubs the flowers all dead.
     they,ve  ceased to exist in this derelict land.
    all the animals left to rot 
    death and decay is all that remains
    except the smog  the chemicals
    which are man made.
    we,ve created the reaper then we went away

      written by Alexis cooper

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    giri commented on the dusty lion

    11-24-2009

    you are thinking of the green earth. yes it is good to have a beautiful place like earth without any pollution. carryon

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    cooperela’s Poems (4)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    the dusty lion 1
    the guardian angel 0
    ALONE 2
    lovers storm 0