The End

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Breaking up is one of the hardest things ever...

The End

You wont answer the phone
You wont answer the door
Then you must know what im going to say to you
Then you must know tht you and I have come to the end
It has come to the point when i am no longer happy anymore
It has come to the end when you have to let go and find a new
When u finally oen the door
When u finally answer the phone
and im at the end of it you know what is going to come next
There may be tears there may be anger but i hope you understand where im comeing from and relize that it has come to the point when we are no more
You will always be in my heart but now it's time to start a new chapter in our lives
You have become one of my dearest friends and I thank you

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gogant commented on The End

10-04-2009

Your ending line of this poem, You have become one of my dearest friends and I thank you, means to me that there is still a lot of love between you and him, and that there is still hope for the two of you..................good luck...................gogant

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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