The Essence of Life


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    • melaquejudy
    • Been off here for a long time. It is good to back among like minded, for the most part, people!

    Poem Commentary

    Short and sweet.

    The Essence of Life

    It sure ain't cadillacs and caviar

    I can tell you that!

    It is sunny days, daisy fields,

    Running free, with the wind at your back!

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    thecross commented on The Essence of Life


    short, concise and to the point I enjoyed this piece




    carynontherhine commented on The Essence of Life


    short yet it is powerful and shows how unmaterialistic you are. For some it is the other way around. I prefer the last lines. Funny, how so many people tell me that those that do have money are miserable and I said I can not imagine why. When she finally finished I agreed that my poor world fits me just finel. Great write!! Hugz

    TinaD commented on The Essence of Life


    Short and to the point and says it all. A good read. Thanks!

    kdarcy commented on The Essence of Life


    You got that right, simply stated, it needs nothing else. Would you be so kind as to look at my latest? " Leave Something Behind " ? thanks, be well k

    Olan01 commented on The Essence of Life


    Straight forward and meaning write, my new friend. Love, peace and freedom, Olan.



    ty for ur feedback!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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