The Final Blaze

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    The Final Blaze
    When the sun sets with the final red blaze,
    I tried to cross the gates of reality,
    into a world where no destinations meet
    the true dreams of tomorrow,
    and you just can't quite make it.
    When the gates open,
    the final red blaze has already disappered,
    and you're already back in reality.

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    LadyLuck commented on The Final Blaze

    06-26-2009

    this is a very good poem considering your age.i'm always trying to escape reality just am nvr able either
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    HarverTomsson commented on The Final Blaze

    06-08-2009

    You will not always be so young. but what a geat start to the world of creative writing! There is only one metaphor:gates. But you used this one imaginatively and effectively. I'm impressed. Keep at it. You will only get better, and better.
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    babygirl48412

    06/26/2009

    thank you so much my older sister helpedme write this piece she is a very taleted writer

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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