Hand's

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    my sister was writing this poem and  thought that it would be a good 1 for me

    Hand's

    I haven't forgotten
    That I am just one person,
    That I am but one voice
    Attempting to stand out
    From the crowd.

    I remember
    That I have fallen
    Amidst the laughter
    That surrounds me, and that sometimes
    It gets too loud.

    I know
    That I can't sit here
    And expect my silence
    To evoke change
    Without reason.

    I can see
    That I don't know everything,
    That I can't expect
    My hand to be held
    Always.

    I can feel
    That time is slipping
    By me, that it
    Will be gone if I just
    Stand still.

    I have heard
    That there are a million
    Other voices that sound
    Like mine, that want also
    To be heard.

    I've been told
    That it's not enough to
    Wish for dreams, that I
    Have to work them
    Into reality.

    I know that I don't know
    All that I think I know.
    I know I won't see all of
    The places I wish to go.
    I know I'm not ready
    For all that the world demands,
    You don't have to always hold me,
    Just let me see your hands.

    I know
    That there's a lot
    That I won't understand,
    That you don't have all
    Of the answers.

    I haven't forgotten
    That I have to grow up
    And someday live without
    Your voice, your opinion--
    Making my own decisions.

    I know that I don't know
    All that I think I know.
    I know that I may not see all
    Of the places I want to someday go.
    I know I'm not ready for everything
    That I won't always understand
    You don't have to always hold me
    But sometimes. . .
    Just let me touch your
    Hand.

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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