THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

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    • poohbear
    • @ home waitin 2 fall asleep got sum thoughts nd 2 write em down

    THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

    KISSING IS A HABBIT
    SEX IS THE GAME
    BOYS GET ALL THE PLEASURE
    SUM SAY GURLS FEEL DA PAIN
    MY LOVE LIFE IS COMPLETLY STRANGE
    ONE MINUTE IM N LOVE
    DA NEXT I WISHED I NEVER KNEW HIS NAME

    IT SEEMS TO ME NOONE LOOKS FOR LOVE
    JUS A PARTNER TO HAVE SEX AND MAKE A FOOL OF
    I KISSED PLENTY OF BOYS
    NEVER FELL IN TRU LOVE
    TOLD THEM I WANTED SUMTHING REAL
    BUT THEY ONLY CHOSE 2 SHOW ME HOW LUST REALLY FEEL
    I CAN'T EXPLAIN DA PAIN THEY BROUGHT
    NAMES DN'T MATTER CUZ MY NEXT POEM WILL TELL U HOW THEY THOUGHT
    THEY ONLY HAD 1 GOAL

    AND IT WASN'T 2 LOVE ME AND TREAT ME KINDLY
    BUT MORE LIKE DO ME RITE JUS TO GET N MY PANTIES
    I CAME UP WITH A CONCLUSIONS
    THAT ALL MEN AREN'T HTE SAME
    BUT ALL MEN AINT SHIT
    THEY DOGG U N THEY OWN LIL WAY THEN OUT THE BLUE LEAVE U WITH A
    BROKEN HEART N A FROWN ON YOUR FACE.



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    bluewolf commented on THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

    11-12-2009

    The one suggestion that I will give is to work on your spelling. Otherwise the words you speak are true; however it is so for both sexes, not men alone.

    poohbear

    08/20/2010

    thanks but there's no work to be done with my spelling this is how i wanted my poem to look I have different ways of writing.

    stormimartin commented on THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

    02-02-2009

    True story!!!

    NayInLove commented on THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

    02-02-2009

    perfect! i loved it

    PunoAngulus commented on THE LAST LOVE POEM PART 1

    02-02-2009

    Quite true. Men have lost the way to treat women with respect. The words of the poem were strong laced with many experience in your life. TO the point and in your face poem. Well Put.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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