The letter remix prt 1(open)

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    The letter remix prt 1(open)

    I don't know how long i can work witcha
    Cuz my mind and body wanna flirt witcha
    I'll try to keep it clean but I wanna create some dirt witcha
    Cuz the way you rub those things
    Makes me wanna get under your shirt witcha
    I don't know what your situation is
    But I'm not down with all those in my biz
    That's why i wrote this poem like i did
    And hopefully maybe you be feeling the kid
    I don't wanna be taking the wrong way or misunderstood
    But to me you be looking so dam good
    I'll shut down the whole dam hood if I could
    And haters disrespecting you I wish a nigga would
    Bet I won't misbehave if you let me peep it
    Cuz like Victoria I can keep a secret
    Hold it and you down like some 10 yr old cement
    Guarentee everyday you'll be having me seek it
    Like Fantasia 'You're always on mind'
    Like R-kelly I don't see nothing wrong with alittle bump -N- grind
    Sweat dripping off of bodies and fingers intertwinde
    That 'G' spot on you that I'll be trying to find
    I mean lets face it I'm not your average type of guy
    And I wanna touch that sexy body like Nina Sky
    Like Stagger Lee 'Shawty how;d you get so fly'
    Don't treat me like Black sheep Like she keeps on passing me by
    Like Dru Hill She walks by me everyday and Beauty is her name
    You got me hot like the moth caught by the flame
    I'm a wild boy but I think this wild boy you could tame
    You can treat me like Luda What's my name
    What's my name What's my name
    I would love to meet you at one of those late night parties
    Somewhere in the corner with my hands all over your body
    Cuz you got me open 24 hrs like a 7-11
    The kid wake up beside you I'll be like this must be heaven
    Yo! you striaght up you got your boy not knowing what to do
    And another thing Gorgeous lets keep this between me and you
    Cuz I can sense all the hate from the haters all in the air
    And when you move across floor I can't help but to stop and stare
    It's a real boring day when your fine ass aint there
    And you be killing when put your fingers thru your hair
    Like Justin Timberlake you definitely bringing sexy back
    That sexy ass body got me feining like a crackhead for some crack
    I don't wanna disrespect but when you pass by I wanna give that ass a smack
    And if it's alright with you I can give you that thing that you say you lack

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    Infect commented on The letter remix prt 1(open)

    02-14-2009

    I'd say gimme a beat but the music just idled down. elluva rythm. got it done here.

    crossguided commented on The letter remix prt 1(open)

    02-14-2009

    This is very good. It drawns the reader in. Great word choice. It feels almost like a rap. It is a little long...but that's not really a bad thing. Keep it up!

    EvilEyes commented on The letter remix prt 1(open)

    02-14-2009

    ah the aquarius..... this is an excellent poem.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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