THE LOVE I LOST

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    THE LOVE I LOST

    I had u my love,but yet I let u go
    . I thought that what I had will always and forever be so
    . But i was wrong as I could be.I took our love for granted
    .I looked at what we shared through my eyes and not with my heart.That's why I couldn't truly see or gain an understanding.
    I couldn't see the realness in your ways,or the sincerity in your eyes,
    I couldn't see the existence of god in your spirit,and the humbleness in your cries.
    I could not put you on that pedestal.Even knowing, that up there is were a queen is most comfortable
    .Instead I was selfish.I pulled u down to my eye level and made u acceptable.
    Is this how a man treats his Blessing from God?
    I ask myself
    .Cause truly without u love, there is nothing left.
    You are the creation of my lord.and the heir of all of his beauty and grace.
    You are the love I lost.
    And the love that ca'nt be replaced.

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    KAYEKAYE commented on THE LOVE I LOST

    11-14-2009

    This is very touching. I like the words they are very true.

    BridgetBowen commented on THE LOVE I LOST

    02-16-2009

    Very moving.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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