The Love I Lost

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    The Love I Lost

    Don't take love for granted. Because why you are playing around,
    trying to make up your mind your love is walking out the door with
    someone else. and you keep saying why, why, He saying you didn't want
    me and I have someone who cares about me. that are not saying wait
    until this happen are give me more time. theat are saying I love you
    for who you are. I try to win him back but it was to take he had found
    another lover. and now am all alone because I couldn't made up my
    mind. Don't waste time try to chose the right size, the right height,
    are you to fat you to small just go with your heart not with size,
    color, height big are small. Just accept the love you have. because I
    lost my LOVE. so now am all alone because I wait to long to take a
    chance.

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    Spacer commented on The Love I Lost

    01-29-2009

    Besides the structure and scrambled thoughts...I liked the way you were going with this poem...the message is very rhetorical and yet we all make that mistake...of taking love for granted...very nice

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Gnone To Soo 0
    Mom I Remember 1
    The Love I Lost 1
    Wedding Ceremony 0
    Our Romantic Night On The Beach 0
    Sister Gone Home 0
    I've Fallen For MICHAEL 1
    Am Not Complaining! Just Happy 0
    Why Why It Hurt So Bad 0
    Know Distance In Love 1