THE ONE I AM LONGING FOR

0 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Poem Commentary

    This is a poem that just came up after watching a love story. I sometimes long for someone to love me for me. Then it came to me that I already do and then the poem developed from there.

    THE ONE I AM LONGING FOR

    Have you ever longed for something that was there all along and it took a song, a movie, a light bulb or a hit on your head to see it?

    Just recently I have thought I needed to write more about Christ but desired and longed to write about something else after seeing a movie

    I longed to write about wanting the love of my life

    You see I want to be loved and desired by a man who can give himself completely to me

    I want to be held and cared for

    I want someone to bring me roses at my door

    I want to be pampered by breakfast in bed.

    I want my faults to be forgiven

    I want to be told I love you every minute of the day

    I want someone to love

    I want someone to listen

    I want someone to laugh with

    I want someone to pick me up when I am down

    I want someone to walk with me through the trials of my life

    I want someone to rejoice with me over the happy times

    I want someone to dance with

    I want someone to sweep me off of my feet

    I want someone to give me a drink when I am thirsty

    I want someone to clothed me when I am naked

    Well, little did I know these poems I long to write are one in the same.

    You see I have the love of my life

    I have someone that loves and desires me and gives himself completely to me

    I have someone to hold me and care for me whenever I need it

    I have someone that brings me roses in different ways

    I have someone that feeds me at all times of the day

    I have someone that forgives my wrongs

    I have someone that tells me not every minute of the day but every second of the day that he loves me

    I have someone to love

    I have someone who will pull up a chair whenever I need to talk and he will listen

    I have someone to laugh with

    I have someone to pick me up when I am down, even through the singing and reading of an innocent young boy named Nolan Read

    I have someone that walks with me through the toughest times of my life

    I have someone that rejoices with me in the happy times

    I have someone that I dance with and will forever

    I have someone that sweeps me off my feet

    I have someone that gives me fresh water when I am thirsty

    I especially have someone that clothes me when I am naked

    I am so very lucky but sometimes to see things you need to open your eyes

    Have you opened your eyes to the love of your life?

    He is there you know for he is everywhere we go

    Look up look all around and you will see a man I call Christ, my first love and love of my life

    I thank you Jesus for being the one I long for.

    Poem Comments

    (0)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    carriebethpoems’s Poems (3)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    YOU ARE REMEMBERED 2
    THE ONE I AM LONGING FOR 0
    I AM THERE 1

    carriebethpoems’s Friends (5)