The one you love

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    The one you love
    I see,
    Tree are green
    The cloud are white
    The brightness day
    The darks and light
    You are in my arm
    What a wonderful world
    To be with the one you love!

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    FoF commented on The one you love

    04-10-2009

    Subjects and verbs should be the same tense - Trees are - clouds are - are in my arms. No rating, delete and repost. Has potential.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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