The Rose

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this was one of my very first poems I ever wrote.

The Rose

She smells of a rose
and looks as the  petals.
She only blooms when
the cold winter blows away.
She comes up out of the
ground when spring time
comes dancing around.
All the people walk by
to look at her beauty as her
buds become petals. She
is there for everyone to love
and see. But be careful, she
might blow away with
the summer breeze.
By the end of summer, the
rose will wilt and die.
All of the happiness of spring
will say good-bye to the
beautiful rose that always
brought love after the snow.

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Teardrops commented on The Rose

12-03-2009

so loving and beautiful love is the rose and you discribe it so wonderfully thanks for the read

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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