The Silent Mind

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    The Silent Mind

    Silently I stumble amongst my own two feet,
    Blaming an opposite party,

    Silently I breathe so I won't be heard,
    Silently I cry I only reveal to the lords.

    Silently I fight with the demonds in my head,
    Telling me it's not better,
    To be living then be dead.

    Silently I wait, sinking in my mind,
    And hoping it will end in a short matter of time.

    I am dead to me, outside, I believe,
    And I'll be silent, again,
    Where I know that I should be.

    L.T.G. ( 2009)

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    Qualin commented on The Silent Mind

    11-27-2009

    STILL I WONDER DEATH,DEMONS,DESPIRE,WHOA'S,JUST DOEST FIT YOU...ALTHOUGH THEY ARE VERY WELL WRITTEN....HOPING YOU WILL NOT END IN A SHORT MATTER OF TIME!!! QUALIN

    boomboom56 commented on The Silent Mind

    09-10-2009

    Strong words. The sadness is overpowering. You describe such a lost soul, but an intelligent one. Good stuff. Thank you for sharing your heart with others.

    Panaramicpoet commented on The Silent Mind

    05-21-2009

    Its very nice. I really like how you put it together. Just Keep up the good work. Maybe you can read some of mine and tell me if they are ok. Have a wonderful day. . . Robert :)

    WordSlinger commented on The Silent Mind

    05-14-2009

    Very original, and loud, A big 10

    WordSlinger commented on The Silent Mind

    05-14-2009

    Very original, and loud, A big 10

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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