The Sweetness Of You.

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    dedicated to my hubby Ali

    The Sweetness Of You.

     Sweet dreams I can magically taste,
    The nectar of your sweet embrace.
    The indulgence of a pure emotion,
    Into your body, so full of grace.


    And in my mind, I realize,
    The sweetness of your simple eyes.
    Color of honey, so light and fine,
    consumes every single part of my life.

    And as I fall more deep into,
    This candy that i know is you.
    It gives me such a pleasant need.
    I feel it in every part of me.

    Sweet dreams of you my love I'm deep,
    Into your world, I truly believe.
    Sweet Deams my love of you I've had.


    My sweetness. I'm proud you are my man!


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    Qualin commented on The Sweetness Of You.

    12-05-2009

    that's what Im talkin about...very good write...haard top find satisfied minds(that is plural as two minds coming together)
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    lisy14u2c

    07/02/2010

    i think you said it best!

    lonewolf commented on The Sweetness Of You.

    11-26-2009

    Wow!, I loved this. Great tribute to the one you love. He's a very lucky man.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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