The Surprise

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    The Surprise

    I want to feel my heart
    touched by a surprise
    an unspoken gesture
    that makes me want to cry

    I want to feel the wonder
    of something I'd never guess
    a mid-day quick hello
    an unexpected kiss

    I want to hear my name
    mentioned as a friend
    talk of all our fun
    and seeing me again

    I want that special gift
    not something you can buy
    the sharing of a moment
    a look into my eyes

    I want to be amazed
    my words are on your mind
    shared across your page
    the best surprise to find

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    kdarcy commented on The Surprise

    05-24-2009

    Loved it, almost sorry I didn't write it, lol, The simple things money can't buy mean the most, great write and a great read

    stephenmichael commented on The Surprise

    03-20-2009

    To be touched by anothers grace is a wonderful thing...Nice poem. Thankyou for sharing...

    kawilaace commented on The Surprise

    03-19-2009

    Interesting that this seeks fulfillment

    caspiancri commented on The Surprise

    03-18-2009

    it was a very nice poem

    Footprints2002 commented on The Surprise

    03-18-2009

    i liked it way to go

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Tick Tock 6
    The Bridge 7
    Symbolic 8
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    The Surprise 6
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    Scott's View 9
    My Love 10
    An Arm's Length 9