the visit

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    the visit

    what ahppens when it sleeps?
    and are all there to watch.
    but for how long would stay?
    when it never gets to wake.
    but at least most came.
    did it see them?
    whats it feel?
    did it like the scenery?
    instead of seeing the light
    after passing the road dark.
    it came,all in dark.
    must you get me all soaked?
    just when i accept to rest.
    guess i know how it feels
    "just go and come back not so dim"
    wish you dindt have to cme in that.
    and i know you wont come again.
    let you kon what?
    am lust like YOU here.
    now thats what hurt most.
    Time will help you be better than
    ME

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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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