This Pain

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This Pain

I wake with this pain

It is strong enough to eat through me

Yet I feel at peace with it

For without it I am affraid to live.

For as long as I can remember it has been there

And without it I might be lost.

It has made me who I am today

And influences the decisions I make

Though it my seem strange I love this pain more than anything

Because of this pain I am a great mother

Because of this pain I am strong

And because of this pain everyone knows you are wrong

I use to pray for this pain to go away

Now I know without it there would be no you

For now I know that it's not just a pain

It is the Journey you have put me through

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justastar2 commented on This Pain

06-07-2009

You seem to be handling your pain well, writing always helps. This poem has good imagery and flows well throughout. You have cute kids and seem to be a very good person and mother. Best of luck and thanks for sharing.

optimistic commented on This Pain

06-05-2009

Pain can always eat away at human life yet it is great that you handle your pain in a diffierent manner I love the flow of this poem it kept me reading.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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