Thoughts of You

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    Thoughts of You

    I will never forget what it meant to me,
    When you first said, “We were meant to be”.
    I would give you a penny for your thoughts,
    Even though I know that they can not be bought.
    I love you more with every breath that I take,
    You are sweet, just like a piece of cake.
    Trust is the one thing that I need,
    If it was a necklace, it would be the biggest bead.
    Thoughts of you fill up my mind, like waves upon the shore.
    The sunny days and starry nights remind me of you more.
    I treasure the time that we spend together,
    That it seems as if the days just fly by.
    Always hold onto our memories,
    But build our future with our dreams.

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    Blueroad commented on Thoughts of You

    09-20-2009

    Your tone is friendly, and it's a the kind of factor that increases the value of your poem.

    fas01 commented on Thoughts of You

    03-13-2009

    HI, I'am new to this site, but I read some of your poems and this one is really good. I rate is a "12".

    poetmaker commented on Thoughts of You

    03-13-2009

    wonderful beautiful loving poetry. keep up the good work. poetmaker

    Poetrygirl81 commented on Thoughts of You

    03-13-2009

    I think it is a nice poem, but a little forced in places.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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