Thoughts

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    Thoughts

    lieing here, night, soaking in the day.
    what's on my mind?, stuck, on replay.

    your arms around me, secure, protected.
    you, asleep, sweet dreams, neglected.

    no music, silence, TV - blank.
    thoughts seeping in, no dreams all fake.

    alone again, your unconscious, missing you.
    wanting your touch, don't wake, kissing you.

    fear of nothing, darkness
    a friend
    the voices, mistreatment
    slowly breaking in

    come get me, rip my soul
    bruise what remains
    security, he promised
    he'll break these chains

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    Bewitchments commented on Thoughts

    03-02-2009

    You have a very raw and emotional talent that is very touching please keep writing it really does help others

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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