To The Stars In Your Eyes

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    To The Stars In Your Eyes

    Dear Beautiful
    Tonight my debt forgoes

    For these feelings fall upon my rose
    My rose, my angel, ...my motivation
    I cannot save your tear? yet your glisten I marvel in fear,
    as you hold me up...

    I see you so clear,
    the stars in the night sky yet are a reflection of your ample eyes

    and so much is hidden still, beneath the stars in your eyes,
    hidden so deeply that could be my demise
    the separation of woe in thought,
    an impossible treason as the thought flies to you,
    always to you...

    the sorrows these stars represent cast glorious shine,
    and I draw breath,
    supported by ongoing hope and a belief in me,
    so selfless, a belief in me,
    through the sorrows of perfection,
    a belief in me...

    when one lost soul looks at this chaos,
    stares keenly through,
    and magnificent beauty dance before his eyes,
    The greater good exists
    He knows completion on grand scale
    how sorrows allot stand not the oblivion that is love,
    deep and true...

    He sees the stars in your eyes that carry him through.
    A force of reckoning, compelling him to see...

    those stars in your eyes are,
    the secret to eternity...

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    knight4696 commented on To The Stars In Your Eyes

    01-13-2010

    USMCDale ... Another great write indeed. Keep on poeting - you are definately talented! Again Great Job! Ken

    sparkle commented on To The Stars In Your Eyes

    03-26-2009

    Very sophisticated for a yound man of your age

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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