Today the children cry

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    Today the children cry
    Today I saw the children cry
    They cry for you
    They cry for me
    Today the children asked me why
    They asked me why
    They will ask you why
    They asked why someone wouldn’t try
    Why I won’t try
    Why you won’t try
    To make the world a better place
    Better for you
    Better for me
    To fill the world full of peace
    Peace for you
    Peace for me
    To fill the world full of love
    Love for you
    Love for me
    To create a world for a happy human race
    After you and after me
    Tomorrow you might see the children cry
    How will you answer when the ask you why?

    ~By P V W

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    countrypoet commented on Today the children cry

    11-14-2009

    I pray that people of all nations will learn to take an active part in creating world peace and showing more love and compassion to one another.Thank you for sharing your vision for a better world and for writing such a wonderfully inspiring and thought provoking poem.Well done!
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    kathib commented on Today the children cry

    08-05-2009

    interesting, I guess I feel us crying more than they do, they accept what they've never known as different and we, we refuse to change it for the better-but nice sentiment
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    Hampton commented on Today the children cry

    07-02-2009

    Very very nice and yes its theme is very similar to my poem Hunger. I commend you on your choice of subjects .
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    Clementinewoods commented on Today the children cry

    06-04-2009

    I"ve been truly enjoying your writings. This poem is no exception. Wonderful! Great Job! Hats Off To You! YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER!!!
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    SyndriaM commented on Today the children cry

    06-03-2009

    Wow this is a really great poem. It really makes the reader want to ask these same questions. Keep up the good work can't wait to read more of your poems.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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