too numb to feel

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too numb to feel

i dont know what to feel at heart
the sweltering sting, the going insane
its numb right now
no hurting no pain

no longet does it bleed
no longer does it lust
the never ending blood
has turned to dry blood dust

broken, bleeding, dusty
its the cycle of my heart
it longs for one to fix it
so it wont stay apart

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stever commented on too numb to feel

11-15-2009

i lkie good lines good ,,good allarond poem,,,,,,,,

AshRenee commented on too numb to feel

06-03-2009

Aw, this one is awesome! Terribly sad, but terrific! Strong emotions like that are what helps make you stronger

Artie commented on too numb to feel

06-02-2009

Very good!.... You convey some strong emotion here. There is no worse feeling than a broken heart. It hits you at your core, and makes you feel this way.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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