heartless

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heartless

my hear, too fragile
to bear any more pain
as i sit and ponder
trying to keep from going insane
my heart like a storm
thunder being my anger
the lightning, my sorrow
the pain is more than just a wound
it will not heal tomorrow
as the lightning strikes
and as the thunder rolls
my heart shatters again and again
like a never ending scroll
the little pieces of my heart
the one's that used to be a whole
will never make that same mistake
i promise you my soul

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AshRenee commented on heartless

06-03-2009

Oooh, this one's wonderful! I wish I had your talent! Of course, to have your talent, I'd have had to have my heart broken, and I'm too much of a chicken for that :) Wonderful, though, really

Artie commented on heartless

06-02-2009

This is great! I love the way you use the storm to describe your feelings..... Great write... Keep it up! I look forward to more.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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