Pain

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  • Pain
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  • Childhood
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  • Anger
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  • Abuse
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  • Hurt

    Poem Commentary

    Written as an insight into the mind of a sexually abused child. A whirlpool of emotions and thoughts invading the no-longer-innocent mind of a child that has lived through this experience.

    Pain
    Crashing
          Falling
                Spinning
          Hurling
    Crashing


    Screaming
          Moaning
                Silentley
          Crying
    Screaming


    Writhing
          Moaning
                Squirming
          Crawling
    Writhing


    Blame
          Confusion
                Shame
          Disgust
    Blame

    Fear
          Loathing
                Hatered
          Mistrust
    Fear

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    laurilang5 commented on Pain

    02-28-2010

    Nice order, sorry you know how the routine goes. Your sparse illustration is so appropriate. I know your pain of naming your work, just remember you can always change it later! After all, it is yours... ;) Just think of what feeling you are trying to convey. Advice offered is only my humble opinion.
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    knight4696 commented on Pain

    02-19-2010

    EmotionalWolf ... I think you hit this one on the head .. The words alone tell the story without having to eloborate on a painful subject. I love the cadence and or form of the poem. Again though ... you gotta give these works suitable titles. Great Job! Ken
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    EmotionalWolf

    02/20/2010

    thanks soo much!!!! ya its hard to think of titles though....

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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