Untitled

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    Untitled

    My mother loved being pregnant with me

    Because my dad wouldn’t beat her

    While I grew and blossomed inside

     

    But the verbal abuse he couldn’t keep behind his forked tongue

    Thinking I couldn’t comprehend or hear

    The insults came everyday, no matter the occasion

    Trying to douse her fire, flicker her flame

     

    Believe me I could feel it

    The tears she shed rolled down her swollen belly

    I could feel her heart beat differently

     

    In twined in my umbilical cord was her spirit

    Sustaining me

    I suckled on that love

     

    Until the day I left that protected place

    And was handed to my dad

    He was more than happy to sever the cord between my mom and I forever.

     

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    OSBrooks commented on Untitled

    08-25-2009

    I loved the following lines: In twined in my umbilical cord was her spirit Sustaining me I suckled on that love This was the best I've read of your work so far. Take care and keep at it.

    enigmatic

    02/13/2010

    Aww, why thank you & I will keep at it!

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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