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Oneday I will be able to bring happiness and joy to someone who
cares for me, But my stupidity doesn't allow my eyes to see

What I feel is right for me is wrong for someone else,
I'm praying for GODS LOVE to be my wealth.

Oneday I'll be head and take charge of my life and the road I must follow, My precious Lord please come into my heart and fill all that
is hollow

Saturate my spirit with your endless LOVE and the warmth of your glory, Let me be your miracle and tell your story.

The story on how you made me hold and gave reasons to live on,
A story how I was weak and you made me strong.

I need to push on and live in a christian way,
I'm asking you LORD to deliver me now today

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candysears commented on untitled

06-18-2009

Excellent write & God Bless & Much Love My Friend In Poetry!!

JaLaw commented on untitled

01-14-2009

Great work! Keep on keeping on brother.

GodsChild commented on untitled

01-10-2009

This is great! It shows the importance of God's love towards his children

Plot121 commented on untitled

12-17-2008

The poem had a good flow to it and you used the images very well. yet to be solely dependent upon something seems kinda codependent sorry I just call them as I see them Robert good work though.

litldeer commented on untitled

12-15-2008

This is beautiful. I read this this morning to start my day. Write on!!!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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