upliftment

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more than anything in life, i want to be.

upliftment

if people do not believe their workis important, use this fact as leverage for them to buy your product or services, saving them from physicsl illness.

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FranzJ commented on upliftment

09-12-2010

I agree with with Qualin about getting attention - if your products or services will help them - then go for it

Qualin commented on upliftment

02-05-2010

you definately have a ten just for your ability to get one's attention..now put to pen an equal to ten....as they say "IT'S WHAT'S UP FRONT THAT COUNTS" put it out here...Qualin

nhorlandi commented on upliftment

06-11-2009

I have to think twice before I get the point. The statement could be right, hit them where they are weak. And I sure do believe "Don't trust girls"

optimistic commented on upliftment

06-10-2009

I like this poem a couple of words I believe miss spelled physical, work is. This poem came straight to the point with a lot to think about before you finally understood.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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