Vacation Love

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    Vacation Love

    I lean over to whisper in your ear
    your eyes show a bit of excitement
    and a bit of fear
    i kiss the beads that stockade around your neck
    as the torches burn bright upon the deck
    we spend the night together
    only to wake up feeling light as a feather
    now my 3 day package is at a end
    this predicament i cannot mend
    i kiss your lips in sorrow
    but my heart you can borrow
    your lips taste of banana
    remnants of the night we spent in Havana
    i feel a bit of remorse when i get on the boat
    were everything but are love can float
    now sadly we must part
    leaving nothing behind but my broken heart

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    prophesy commented on Vacation Love

    02-27-2009

    i feel what you mean. the poet

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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