Violence

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    Violence

     I say stop the violence.
    Peace and quiet a momment a silence.
    Death everywhere I go.
    Life's a chalange.
    Every scar I received.
    Will alway's be the same even if I went to planet Mars
    Paradise is soon a be.
    So why let it bugg me.
    When I have my whole Life ahead a me.
    But understand that a urban community.
    Is the reason why we can't live in unity.
    God gave me the oppurtunity.
    To allowed me to see.
    So I do.
    The world is my home.
    Where i will alway's be.

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    Chigger2069 commented on Violence

    12-06-2010

    Great write and very true we all have a chance to use are voices and writting to help stop the the violence.
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    Sx9 commented on Violence

    11-06-2010

    yes yes we all share the world,and all its trimmings,but mine is a different thing to hold tight,and control into moles of peace ful thinking souls,violence will be we just which it never was,,cool piece,,
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    And195

    11/09/2010

    thanx

    koolmom0 commented on Violence

    11-06-2010

    This is awesome, a very well written piece. I look forward to reading more from you. :)) Kool
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