Waited Too Long to Call

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sometimes I have to remember to forget.

Waited Too Long to Call

You took way too long to call me , boo,  I guess you always thought that i would always love you. I do, for true, I just can't stand you. People still say "ain't no way, he was a punk and the town drunk, whod've thunk,he woulda dumped you !"  we were engaged, now i"m outraged, in a cage on stage, going through a phase?  Naw i don't think so. you left, remarried your ex wife, fully fucked up my  whole life. Then you  called and begged to come back ,you got married  7 days ago jack! 2 months later you came back , left again after 4 days jack. then you called and called for two years straight. I did'nt wanna see you but i could'nt wait. I felt this would be our last goodbye. You did'nt call for a year,oh me oh my. Then one fine day brrrrrrng, bbbbrrrrrrrng it's you, my son answered the phone , you did'nt know what to do. "Hello", "Hello,boo, who was that?" "somebody that wants to beat you with a baseball bat, my youngest son, ain't  his voice so deep, why ? you thought i was with another creep ? I'm happy and free, free to be me, loving my LORD AND SAVIOR, who rescued me. He said forever and that is what HE means. You did'nt last as long as a pot of greens ! You say you miss me, you miss yo self. You the muthafucka that up and left. Everday you were gone I learned to love my self. If you really loved me you would'ntve left. I begged you twice ,  no , three times to stay with me. but now I thank you for letting me be. The longer you did'nt call,the more time i got to think;love is a sweet smell,this shit stink ! Love does'nt hurt , this pierces to the core. WHO'S KEEPIN SCORE.  HERE'S LOOKING AT YOU KID. I sill love you. You never did.

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Chaos128 commented on Waited Too Long to Call

01-21-2010

Ha ha It like you leave any room for doubt, is it. Peeps sure can't say you're stringin' em along when the string is a rope with a noose on the end ha ha truly tight!

GentleT commented on Waited Too Long to Call

08-09-2009

There is a time to move on and it seems like you have reached that point. It is good that you decided not to be used and abused any more. To think more of yourself than that.

DORCELLA

08/09/2009

THANK YOU

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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