waiting for approval

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    i love when others show me the good inside of them. well actually i look for it.

    waiting for approval



    here i sit cold and shaking yelling out " save me save me!"
    my hands are frozen and hard.
    my hands are red and barred.

    "save you from what? ... yourself?"

    now i sit red with anger and frustration
    waiting for his acclamation...
    something i never get.
    but thats alright because, i look for the good in it.

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    Kingwebstar commented on waiting for approval

    12-31-2012

    Short and powerful great job. Keep writing and thanks for commenting me on my work. Nice to meet you by the way. Love Da KinG

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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