What do you really want?

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    What do you really want?

    Moving in a direction where I want to experience peace. Allowing the enemy to control me will not be done. See when trouble arises I call my Father in heaven so that He can create the disguise.  Not easily taken by your unwillingness to survive. Not knowing if you really want, what it takes to strive.

    Creating division among the ones who say you love. You better be careful and don't disobey our Father above.  Taking chances to disrupt was has been established for years will do nothing for you but bring pain and tears. 

    Wanting to experience peace at what level of praise are you willing to meet. Just as your blessing was coming down and your praises were going up be sure to continue what your doing to allow your blessings to continue to come down.  Yes, Jesus worn the crown. A crown of thornes and to what limits are you placing on your praise on?

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    Rhymer commented on What do you really want?

    01-10-2010

    Nice message and I enjoyed the read very much. Nice job 10 from me.

    cmlestrade commented on What do you really want?

    01-10-2010

    This is a very nice poem, but the punctuation and a couple of grammatical errors interrupted the flow. It was a bit awkward and the wrong use of verb tense caused a distraction but the overall message was beautiful.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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