What The Hell Happend To Us

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    What The Hell Happend To Us

    It's been a while since I've been able to write down my thoughts in the form of a song, wondering is it all my fault that it's taken this long.

    I pause for a second........ Inhale.........Exhale........Wow that's much better, my mind a little more clear, ready to jot down a few lyrics for the world to hear.

    Not to thrilled with the subject matter I'm about to discuss, and the title of this piece shall be called.... WHAT THE HELL HAPPEND TO US?

    What the hell happend to all the good times and laughter,
    What the hell happend to the time when nothing else mattered,

    I know in all relationships we must go though a storm, but being away from you is like seperating a mother from her new born,

    My pride asking me why do I cry inside while others pass me by, as I realize my response was not the correct reply,

    Still I stand as a man letting you walk away without a fuss, but before you walk away forever please tell me......... WHAT THE HELL HAPPEND TO US?

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    blvdobd2009 commented on What The Hell Happend To Us

    07-24-2010

    wow, thats a work to only be understood when you know first hand what that type of relationship is like... for you I rate a 10

    Dreamer123 commented on What The Hell Happend To Us

    07-20-2009

    wow full of emotions. thats seems to be eveyone's fave to write about. well i dont blame you or them cause it's deep inside. inside your heart and soull. wonderful poem. thinking about a love or someone that you just don't know what happened. wonderful a 10.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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