When I see a woman

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    When I see a woman


    When I see a woman, sweet fear grips me.
    When I see a woman, my heart thunderously shakes my chest and sweat pours down my forehead.
    When I see a woman, I loose control for my brains can’t handle it.

    She took me from the kingdom unknown and brought me into the kingdom so bright.

    My friends wept when she took me, for they were never to see me again.
    They cried helplessly and hopelessly yet I had transitioned to a higher kingdom. To them I was dead; to the woman I was conceived.

    When I see a woman, every goose bump of my body swells and I tremble.
    When I see a woman, every muscle of my body stiffens with anxiety.

    She hid me in her river for nine moons, yet I did not drown.
    She never fed me from a plate for nine moons, yet I did not starve.

    Within herself, she protected me and made sure I grew from a little seed to a miraculously well formed and shaped creature.

    When I see a woman, my heart thunders, I tremble and I shiver,
    For I know the power she posses.

    When I see a woman, sweet fear grips me, because;

    When I see a woman, I see a miracle !

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    mdpoetgirl commented on When I see a woman

    06-09-2009

    Great poem. Very sensual, gripping and heartfelt. What a lovely way to think of a woman - a miracle.

    freind commented on When I see a woman

    06-04-2009

    well i just know that was a very heart felt poem. i know were that poem came from.i liked it alot.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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