When I See You!

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    When I See You!

    When I see you,
    Everything goes blank.
    I don't know how it happens
    but it does.
    My mind, the Earth
    Everything is gone
    except you.

    When I look into your eyes,
    theres a sparkle.
    A sparkle like I've never seen before.
    I can't explain it,
    but I like it.

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    hdmac commented on When I See You!

    06-25-2009

    Short and accurate. It is good to see teens expressing themselves on this site so well. It's as if you are looking into the face of God.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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