when I

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    when  you have siblingz this is when i come innn. and this is what i know

    when I

     When I look at you i see god
    When I look at you i see strength
    When I look at you i find hope
    When I look through you i find emotions
    When I look through you i see pain
    When I look through you i see hurt
    When I look at you i see hope
    When I look ahead you i see future!
    When I look behind you i see mistakes
    When I look around you i see disater
    When I look in you i see love
    When I look beside you i see me!

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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