When The Sex Is Done

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    When The Sex Is Done

     The sex wasn't so bad but, the mood was so sad.When the sex is done,will he be gone? He was her deepest regerts her depest secret. She was somebody baby and one of his lady. When the sex is done she ask herself will he be gone.She thought he was notthing to hide not knowing she was just another ride.The sex wasn't so bad but, the mood was just so sad. when the sex is done will he be gone?She was hand crafted by the the only one above another girl drafted by his love.She's hanging on a slope now the girl he lelf with no hope.When the sex is done will he be gone?She wasn't ready  but with her hope she hold on steady.So she went on wondering when the sex is done,will his love be forever gone?

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    modica3 commented on When The Sex Is Done

    07-21-2009

    UR POEM IS VERY TRUE, ESPECIALLY FOR TEENAGE GIRLS, LIFE IS FULL OF " WHEN THE SEX IS GONE". VERY INSPIRING KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. MODICA3
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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