When The Sun Is Gone.

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I know its not very scientific but it's still poetry :D

When The Sun Is Gone.

When the sun is gone the sky will darken to black. Earth will fall, no going back. What once was beautiful and warm will now be frozen and gray. Will all life on earth be gone? No human would be alive to say. So pray there's a heaven and ask for forgiveness. Will god forgive you? Well he just may, but just remember, that the sun will be gone someday.

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

BlindSnake’s Poems (7)

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