When You Die
And when you sleep
Dive to a dark abyss
And when you dream
Just tred in bliss
And when you hurt
Let blood pour true
And when you fall
See how you grew
And when you cry
Tears fall like rain
And when you die
There is no pain
When You Die
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melki18 commented on When You Die
09-15-2011
- i love this, it's short but shows a lot of passion and character
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Solaris commented on When You Die
09-14-2011
- good poem well written I like this one
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