Where am I?

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  • Lost Love
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  • Sadness
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  • Loss

    Where am I?

    Where am I?

    The darkness is everywhere.
    The pain just keeps coming,
    I can't stop it,
    I can't run,

    Where am I?

    I can't breath,
    I drop to knees and scream,
    Please, someone, reach for me!
    But nothing, No one.

    Where am I?

    I am alone in the darkness.
    Only my pain and I,
    My cries echo threw the night,
    They are the only sounds in my world of darkness.

    Where am I?

    I have been forgotten,
    left behind forever,
    un noticed,
    un missed,

    Where am I?

    I am without my love!!!!!!

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    jademelissa74 commented on Where am I?

    05-30-2009

    There is much pain in this piece. I like the imagery that you created. Pain will die, even when it seems impossible :))Great job! Congratulations!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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