where am i

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    where am i

    Alone in a world full of vultures
    can you never look away
    I was just one cast away
    one little glitch on the computer
    then the silence got to me

    Day becomes night in the same hour
    drinking away my enemies
    smoking out all the lies I was fed
    you could see me with the sun in my hair
    but it struck deep in my soul

    Yet only a few come see me know
    I lost my soul to  a thief
    a thief of the heart and the body
    my soul lost to the devil
    maybe this solitude the darkness
    can show me who it was that put me here  

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    vinci commented on where am i

    06-15-2009

    the expressions are good and the feeling is very deep state of inner self lost in solitude to someone. Good Work !!!

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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